i really like it and i understand wat the poem means

Hey...in answer to the first two questions. Yes. I see what you hide. I know your smiles aren't real. Please be safe. I'll talk to you later.

There's always time for poetry if it's something you truly enjoy. Anyhow... Your rhyme scheme changed and it threw me off. Tears for Fears. Good 80's band. Yes.. so really.. If every other line rhymes, keep it that way. I use to change mine a lot and when I read over it, it would be so...whatever. Have a nice day.