Very sad story, but I still like it. it has a happy-end, sort of.

Aw, cute. I think it's fitting that the princess is not really a Disney princess at all (or at least one that I don't recognize). It would be just a little too cliche if she was. Kudos on quoting Hamlet. :P Very fitting to such an overall depressing story.
Keep it up! I liked it a lot!

if you joined this and the pprequel together, it would make a good ongoing story

awesome

A beautiful, tragic story. I adore it.