Really? You haven't updated since 2007?
Please update soon! It's off to a great start :)

I love where this is going, and pray that you'll get around to finishing it sometime. No pressure, really. :D

Wow! This story is great! Though, I have to say Allison Wonderland is my favorite, who knows, this may change that. It was really well written and intriguing and I'm really excited to see where it goes.

This is really good. I like where this seems to be going. I hope to read more to it soon.

I like this very much.
I wish you would contiune this!

I think I reviewed this when I first read it, but I still love it now xD. It's a shame that you haven't written since, but I suppose you've been busy with Allison Wonderland. Any news on someone wanting to publish you yet? Good luck, and keep on writing.

Update soon, please.

You are extreamly talented!! I hope your other story Allison Wonderland gets published!! I am starting to like this story so could pleae update it if you have the time. *big puppy dog eyes* lol!

i'm really liking the story! Seems so real, like on TV or something, one tree hill, that kind of thing. hope you update soon =]

I absolutely love where this is going...please update soon!

Intriguing...! So far the plots been okay. Sort of typical, but you've straight up said how the characters are feeling, exactly. I think you should perhaps alter your writing style a touch when you change points of view though - surely the guys and the girls, at least, would have different thought processes?

I will definitely keep reading, your story is quite interesting. Please update soon!

Interesting yet very predictable plot. The changing of POV's makes it so the reader cannot get particularly close to the story since it's flip-flopping around all the time. I'm guessing you're trying to explain fully what each character is feeling and all of that but after awhile it gets distracting and the reader can't remember who said what. Just pick one character to be the main your story would be stronger.

you're very talented. I can't wait to see where you go with your writing. Best wishes!

dude, you write AMAZING storys. I got hooked on your last major one, and really, its amazing lmao

yeah, please update soon.

i think this is SO good. i like how you show everything from different people's perspective (sp). You need to write more. im hooked =]