Reviews for The World Game: Chapter 1

C.Sabbadin
2007-05-25
ch 1,

abuseYou missed some puncuation but this had an interesting take on hackers, and the future.

Though you should not mention the cloned children if they were not a part of the story.

also if this is a multiple chapter story then you must add the second chapter onto this story. Some one can teach you how to do this.

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