Reviews for Alptraum und Gedächtnis

Me 2007-05-25 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like it. Details given later.
C.Sabbadin 2007-05-24 ch 1,	abuseThe use of fragment sentences would usually irk me but in this instance it seems to suit the narrator. Remembering his birth was strange but it had an interesting concept to it. Your work is interesting.
Indigo 2007-05-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is the best story I read on this god forsaken website. Son't listen to that pricks comments above. He is just trying to find little mistakes that don't mean **. WAY OUT! (:-D
Nirnaeth Arnoediad 2007-05-24 ch 1,	abuseI really enjoyed this. The tone is really nice and perfect for the subject, especially in the final paragraph, and I love the way you put the title in German; it gives the words a much more visceral feel. There are a couple of typos, though. In the first paragraph, "That is out way" should be "our", I think, and in the second to last paragraph "what he lived for" should be "we". Also, in the third paragraph when you write "hideous mismatches.." and then say "they were hideous" in the next senetence, it's kind of repetitive. Other than that, though, this was a really amazing piece; good job.