Well written poem. I like the title. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

It makes me think about madness and medication. Very well written. I particularly like the last two stanzas, they feel like the paranoid thoughts of a drug addict. Well done.

this is kul!

that last stanza..."Still, I see It Before my closed eyes. Still, I hear It Through my covered ears..." god...
all the poem its very well describe, i can relate with every single word...good work.


This world is ((In State Of Agony))

I really did like it, so true and meaningful...

I like this a lot. The second to last stanza was my favorite. You've worded this piece excellently and I like the way this was written with only one word at each of the last lines in each stanza. It gave them more impact and intensity. Great work, and thanks for the reviews!

I love this, especially the last stanza. The title and the summary work really well. I hate when people write bad summaries. Very, very good job.

This poem makes me think of the voice that people hear in their heads. Good poem.

~SirScott

Very nice, I ove the esoteric , yet simutanteously relateble fel to this...deep stuff, well done!


Peace,love,rock and rol:
ben

Be careful with repetition. The end of the poem needs to try and clinch the ending better. The repetition seems to make the poem a little too open. I do like the overall tone and mood of the poem; it's quite haunting. Just try to show the power of the poem throughout the entirety, and make the ending less open and confusing. Great job, overall.

to be honest, sometimes I feel like that, your poem is good, full of deep emotions that nobody knows..

Wow amazing and deep! I love the flow of it. I wanted to read it until the very end. Great job! =D

I like it! Good job. It seems like a mix between struggling with temptation and struggling with paranoia.