Reviews for The Lost Princess

Reviews For: The Lost Princess

criti-sized 2008-04-09 ch 1,	abuseAgain, another poem of yours that I like. What I really like is the evasive story that is told in the words and aren't so forward. I did feel though that the fact you stated that it was the male's voice, or the woman's voice took away the easy flow of their words. Possibly distinguishing the difference in the talk is a good thing. Like having the woman's in italics, and the guy's in regular text... It's just a suggestion, if you dont want, you don't have to pay attention to it. C.S.
Everything to you 2008-01-02 ch 1,	abuseVery thought out on what you want said, and from whom. I like it. I was confused at first about what is going on, and still a little confused, but I can almost feel the pain in the man's voice. I think you could have explian what's going on a little more. But all in all I thought it was good
Mosaic Stains 2007-08-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseWhile reading this, I thought about when I was taking up my art course. My instructor's first words to us were that we will learn to look at things according to the conformity of it and why the artist painted it the way they did. I guess, while reading, I was wondering why you wrote this, and what is the story behind the story. And I was intrigued by the way you wrote it. The versatile narrations was pretty interesting to me. I mean in the way they said things and meant the same thing. It was like looking into a backwards mirror or hearing, as I refer to it, "Yoda " talk and then normal speech. It also reminded me of going to an Opera. They use words and emotions to express how they feel and what is going on, but they do it in a different way from a musical or broadway show. Overall, I thought it was cute and sad that this is the way they could be together and join each other. ~M.S.
concerto49 2007-08-25 ch 1,	abuseI felt a little frustrated after reading it, I mean characters all seem lost and all. Guess that's how it is in life - things never are straight forward, and often they're never how we want them to be either. All these voices - sounds a bit like a play too. Interesting. Anyhow. Cheers. Concerto.

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