wow!...i dunno what else to say to that!! you are really good! i love you so much and you are an awesome writer!!\\


~Luna

Ah, this is good. Powerful lyrics. This would make a sweet song, with some hardcore guitar. Much enjoyed. Also, feel free to check out my story. Reviews are always welcome!

if this was a song I'd listen to it. love it. good job!

You've also been listening to too much Evanescene, ha ha. I was listening to "Tourniquet" on the bus once and the driver got mad. She was like, there's no reason I should be able to hear that music all the way up here. I was like, "Dude.. You can hear everybody else talking about sex and you didn't say anything to them. The only difference is I've got drums, ha ha." Yeah. Anyhow, this is good. Won't you come and save me? Alice in Chains. Gotta love them. So anyhow..

This is really flippin good chicky. I like it alot. I can imagine this on the radio. I don't know exactly how you'd want it played...but I can see people jammin out with their guitars and having a little hardcore screamo...