seems like a lot of emotion went into this poem, so almost any one can be seen here. I like how almost anyone can relate to this and put their own experiences into it, great job!

i love the words. Major favorites. Nice going.

Your poem is so incredibly beautiful, and it flows so easily, like the rain that it speaks about. But it is so very sad. You can see so much pain in those words. But nonetheless--very, very beautiful poetry. I just hope whatever or whoever made you write it... well... I hope it gets better for you :'(

Take care, and keep writing