Okay, okay, I give. I loved your story, both this one and the first, enough that I owe you a review finally, and one of your FAQ's inspired me. Now, in a list form:

1: You are wrong about one thing. Writing Dhai and Jacob's wedding is not a stretching. It would be a finalization of what they did after college, the culmination of all the work we saw them doing throughout college, so it would be appropriate, and I know I am not the only person who would think this.
2: YOU ROCK!! This story is one of the best I have read in I don't know how long, because you are one of the writers on this site who created an almost realistic world that had thought and creativity put into it that, at least if you had even half of a reader's brain, you could easily follow. Please continue to put out new works on this site! I really need something good to read, and, if this story is any indication, whatever you write would have to be at least interesting.
3: Now, the reason I was inspired to write a review. You said not many people made comments on your anime reference's, and I would in this review if I remembered any, but I was copying and pasting this story (in case you had to take it down due to plagarization, as has been happening a lot lately, sadly,) I was rereading a little of it, and I came across the graduations chapter. I saw the referenc you made about Elisa's bro's play... Really? You chose that obscure of a reference? Please tell me you were hoping for a response to that, because i think that anything that brings attention to that game is genius, and worthy of very high praise! You, my friend, are a conisseur of great games, and my hat is off to your memory, because, even though that is one of my very favorite games, (hey, I am a sucker for romance), I don't even remember that part of the game, evne though it shows up in, in my opinion, the best game-ending of all time. I'm sorry for filling up your review list with my fanboydom, but that game just always makes me happy and Iam extremely pleased whenever I meet a fellow lover of that game.

Anyway, just wanted you to know that you do still have fans, although I probably read Magicademy about two or three years ago, I am recently coming back to it. I finally man'd up and dove into a two-year degree with emphasis on english, so I suggested this site to one of my prof's, and I specifically suggested this story/series to her. I wanna make sure you are okay with her possibly using this for classes of some sort. Please contact me at if you have any objections, or to say yes. I told her I’d ask your permission first before I did anything with this story. Thank you, again, for giving me something to enjoy so much, and I wish you luck in your writing endeavors. I mean hey, so many of us on this site want to be writers, and only so few will succeed, so we gotta look out for each other, right? ZIDANExDAGGER FOR ALL TIME!!

This was deffinately a great story, the characters are all like totally relaxed but they still have depth to them, the series was great! I think it would be awesome if you could find someone to turn this into a comic! You are a great writer, but there were a few spots with spelling mistakes or whatev but it was still an amazing story. The thing I liked most was how you didn't have a main character, you wrote from everyone's (in the groups) point of view. I also love how you used traditional races (ie: elves, dwarves) added in some new ones and sorta combined races or got them off of video games, no offense. I loved this series, amazing, you are a great writer, now publish something! Haha, this was great thanks for a good read.

GREAT STORY! I just started reading it recently but I'm already in love with it. I can't believe it's over already T_T I'm going to miss reading about the adventures of jacob and aidis and everyone else but great story still! I hope you continue to write more amazing things. - Matt

Great story!

I just read the whole series... and it was awesome.. I read tons and find few stories as well developed as yours. I liked that there was no over arching plot/mystery/what not. I look forward to reading anything else that you come up with!

Hai,

I went through the whole story in the last week or so. I just wanted to thank you for writing and posting it. It's a wonderful story and while I am sad to see the characters go, I'm very happy with the way you ended things. It seems very appropriate.

I guess I'll end this fluffy un-critique now cause it's somewhat pointless except to say thanks. OH, I do know someone who MAY just want to turn this into a comic strip with you. I'll *cough* force him to read it, and then email you when he loves it.

Lots of luck in all your writing endeavors,
Mandi

Awesome story! Great plot, this is soo going into my faves.

That was awesome! And I agree, it was a perfect place to end it. :) Thanks for the great ride, and good luck with the writing career. :D

I get that some things must end. particularly college stories. But if Aidis and Naomi are grad students, does that mean they are still going to be at college? The ending was nicely done, in any case. :)

One more question: Planning to publish this offline? ~.^ It could certainly happen.

I'll see what I can do about the comic. XD










...Is truly over. T.T Very depressing.

I started reading the story with Magicademy was on about chapter 3. After checking manually almost everyday, I finally figured out how to get fictionpress to send me notices when the story updated. I have tremedously enjoyed watching not only the story grow, but your writing style get better and better. I know you said at the start that your were writing this with manga in mind, have you considered submitting it to a publishing company? But, ayways, I wanted to say I really enjoyed the story, and hope that you submit other items in the future to the site for us to read. Thank you for sharing this vision with us, and good luck on making many more to get paid for. :)

Following this story for four years creates a place in your being. A love for a great work of art that is Magicademy.

Since the beginning I've been following this, and I cannot believe that its finally over.
When you finish a good book or a good story, you get the "Wow, I can't believe its over" feeling, and it sticks with you.

Magicademy shows a love for life that not many people show. Your characters are a good example of how to live your life day to day. Fun in your eyes, and kindness in your heart.

I plan to keep this story, and everything is portrays, with me forever.

Your writing is a great work to say the least, and you have great potential as a professional writer.

I'll be sure to keep in touch with you when I can.

Hopefully not a final goodbye:
Fred

PS. I cried when I finished the last chapter. Just because it was over. :'[

So that's it. Okay. I'm cool with that--visualizing a happily-ever-after is as good as reading one, and I am definitely visualizing happy endings for all.

This was a great series, it really was. (I would love to see it turned into a comic too, but eh.) Good job, and good luck with everything you do.

Seeya 'round.

I don't think I've done this before, and for that I sincerely apologize, I kept meaning to review this story.

Where to start? I have enjoyed few stories on fictionpress as I have enjoyed this story. I first discovered it back before the original was finished, years ago and have been following it regularly ever since.

You have wonderful gifts for characterization and dialogue, and an excellent imagination. I have loved reading about your characters' adventures and am sorry to see the story end, but I understand of course that it ends for a reason.

Please, at least tell me we will see more stories from you in the future? Even if it's set in a different universe, I would very much like to see more of your work.

Thanks for all the entertainment.

Aw, that was awesome! If anything, the ending seemed a little sudden, but that was all I could say negatively about it.
Amazing, from first word to last! I said everything in my last review though; but this was by far one of the best stories I've ever read on Fictionpress. Which isn't saying too incredibly much, but still ...
Amazing.
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