Is April an Autumn month in Australia?

I should review more chapters because I really like this story but when a story is already several chapters in I usually just keep reading and forget to review.

But point is, really like this story. It's concise and the characters are really interesting.

I keep forgetting what happens and rereading XD But it's totally worth it since I seriously love this story. And I really liked this chapter. It gave a lot of insight into Theo's character. He's fascinating XD And Noah's awesome at this mothering stuff. I think they'd make a wonderful, balanced couple. Well. Balanced in the sense that they're pretty opposite :3 As always, looking forward to more! :D

This story is awesome! I can't wait for more, but please, don't make us wait for more than a month/ far less a year!

:D I love Theo, and I just want to pinch Noah's cheeks... I'm really curious as to what happened to Theo's dad and brother!!

*needs to find out, soon*

I had forgotten how much I love this. Then I reread it. And now I remember. Ah, a good start to the day :3
Ah, I thought I'd review this before! But apparently not o.o Hm. I'm forgetful sometimes. (Ah! This means I've forgotten to review the other stories! o.o)
Anyway! LOVE THIS. SO MUCH. Beautifully written and interesting :3 It just dragged me in and wouldn't let go! Not that I wanted it to. Oh, Dan gives me the jeebies D: But Noah's flippin' cute, and I find Theo adorable. I can't wait to read more! *flails*
Couple questions (probably cultural ^^;;): is the toilet separate from the shower room-wise? Also...what's a singlet? O.o *feels like a spaz*

Gosh, wow. I know the lyrics are probably supposed to make Noah more apparent but to be it just puts more... Character? Something like that. It's just the way he did it. Finding the book and then hastefully putting it -back-. Yeah, Theo just got a little more... alive. Realistic.

Update! Yay!
The wonderland lyrics were nice, and i like how Noah's personality is slowly struggling through.
Oh, beach caves. So much fun. i want some.

I adored the last sentence. And **, did you write the lyrics? They were.. wow.

this story is really good; i'm surprised you're not rolling in reviews

I HEART THEODORE.

UPDATE.

Why can i not log in?
Oh well.
Theo is pretty cool, even if he is a dick. Also, the photo gig was classic.
Noah and Stacey kissing? ew.
And i hear the beds being too short, man, do i hear that.
can't wait for the next one!

This story sounds very interesting. I like how I was able to just jump into a chapter and pick up the characters very easily. You did a good job showing Theo's character through his narration, and Fiona's through her dialogue.

I noticed some tense switches, particularly towards the beginning. Other than that, this was a very good chapter.

There seemed like a few minor spelling and grammar errors throughout the chapter, so take a quick review of it again. Otherwise, not a bad read!

I really love this beginning. It's so intriguing, and really leaves me wondering what's going to happen next. And okay, I totally already love Theodore. The poor guy sounds like he has such a troubled past, though! I feel for you,Theodorore, I do. And I really loved the "one sided games" comment--good to know he has a sense of humor! Even if it's sarcastic.

There was just one grammar thing I noticed; you say "After an hour of waiting, I returned" --it should be "return," since you're writing this in the present tense. Kudos for that, by the way. I absolutely love the present tense, haha, so to see someone actually using it correctly makes me smile.

This was really, really well-written! I love your phrasing - especially the line "The door to the world of ‘what was’ has swung violently open, and now the memories are firing punches that I can’t dodge." Who says the prologue is dull? It is a little short (the only thing I can comment about in the 'dislike' requirement - and it's not even a criticism), but very nice.

Can't wait to read on.