I love this and how it rhymes and that it's sort of silly-serious and my absolutely favorite line is "she's left-lane broken streetlamp" and it's lovely.

Great job! I loved the way it flowed, and I loved the rhyme!

"She wants to play and dance and sway and laugh away the night." A nice depiction of adolescent happiness. :)

I liked it, especially the reapeating: "she's the widdershins girl"

Your songs all seem to have a rhythm that makes them very catchy for me. I really like this one; the lines are creative and descriptive. It reminds me of something by Jason Mraz, if you know who that is. I'm putting this on my favorites list! :)

Very cool. Discribes a lot of girls. I'll give this one a 3 out of 5. Good job.

This writing drew a perfect picture, in a playful manner.. Simply wonderful to read, thank you :)