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| d666lisa 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseBEAUTIFUL |
| Georgianna 2007-05-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is magnificent and very haunting. I really like how you stated that he lost sleep for the girl...but never tell your audience why. It is much more fun to wonder why. Much praise, Georgianna |