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Reviews For: The Girl You Lost Sleep For

d666lisa
2007-11-03
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abuseBEAUTIFUL
Georgianna
2007-05-25
ch 1,
abuseThis is magnificent and very haunting.
I really like how you stated that he lost sleep for the girl...but never tell your audience why. It is much more fun to wonder why.

Much praise,
Georgianna
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