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Oracle of Destiny 2007-11-07 . chapter 1
I liked this. The way you play with the words is very clever and intriguing. Keep up with the good work.
Twilight Starr 2007-10-18 . chapter 1
Great poem.

We all go through some temptation some time in life.

It was very sweet in the spiritual sense. ^^

~Twilight Starr~
elisefey 2007-05-25 . chapter 1
Very eloquent and heartfelt.
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