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| SuperTD 2007-08-10 ch 1, | Scary, especially the bit about the crosses above the doors. Good Story! |
| orangejello 2007-05-26 ch 1, | Creepy, and yet I enjoyed it immensely. good job! it made me smile. and your english assignment makes me smile. |
| Rubyscarlet 2007-05-25 ch 1, | That's pretty different, i like it though. You have great imagery and i love how you repeated the part about the eyes. I want to know a little bit more about the girl though, it would be cool to add in. |