Ah, Latin! My leisurely study of choice!

Veni! Vidi! Velcro!

(my totally nerdy play on that great Julius Caesar quote, Veni, Vidi, Vici. Get it? Ahh, well...)

Great story! It's witty and intelligent, and reminds me a lot of myself. I tell you, doorways do expand!

Keep it up!

The Raven by Edgar Allen Poe- ZOMG IMMA FRIGGIN' NERD!1 D: But anywho, seems like an interesting intro to this chappie. Sly, sarcastic, witty. Punctuation definitely plays nicely with the tone in the story. I've always wanted to take up on Latin too... >_>

Keep up the nice work,
~Sei.

I'm looking forward to reading more of this. I took Latin all 4 years of high school and I'm interested in seeing where you go with this. So far it's funny and I like how it's written.