|Reviews for lackluster lingers|
| simpleplan13 8/30/07 . chapter 1
interesting and powerful haiku
| littlest clouds 6/16/07 . chapter 1
I really like this. It's short and compact, but impactful. Good work!
| finger on the trigger 6/3/07 . chapter 1
you know, it's difficult to write such short verse, and not many people can pull it off. all I can say is:
it really is. I don't know, you left me with a feeling that you had said it all. it's amazing, I tell you.
| Moondog Dozier 6/1/07 . chapter 1
Excellent sound and flow for a haiku. I like how this spreads over the lines and continues rushing. Great haiku. MD:77.
| she smolders 5/30/07 . chapter 1
Oh my, the rhyme in this is so effective and the haiku itself is almost morbid in a way that it's almost beautiful too.
| this young lady 5/25/07 . chapter 1
wow, gorgeous flow...i love it. Haikus are hard to write but this one is perfect.I'm putting it on my favourites.