O.o Creepy and beautiful all at once

i love it though i don't think i get it...i convinced myself that i got the first one but this one may have gone over my head...i was never one for over analyzing...

These are very interesting. I hope you continue the series.

MK

I hope Kendal makes you write more! :)

Aww, that one was pretty sad. T.T *hugs the raven/angel boy* Sorry about your broken tooth, how'd that happen?

wow, the imagery is amazing. i love, love, love the last line of damnation, "our blasphemy shocking the world anew."-that is beautiful. extremely deep. lol. keep up the amazing works

This is so artistic, I could almost picture it perfectly. Althought again it was a little fuzy, I got this better then the first.

At first, I thought you were going for a re-make of Paradise Lost. But, now that I look at it, I don't think that's the case. I believe Milton's Satan fell because of greed and pride-he wanted to BE God. Your Satan fell because he loved creation more than the Creator. Interesting concept.

Here, "'Will you not love me again?'" I wonder if he's talking to God or humanity. God, I suppose. Would a fallen angel really hope for redemption?

"But if the Christ so loves me, enough that he would die for the entire world, shouldn't he come down from his cross and save me from this ferocious ballet?"

I think the question may be: does she want be saved?

beautiful love. i just cant stop reading it, over and over again. the first chapter is so wrong, its right. pretty boy, sounds enchanting, beautiful, all the sinful loves. the first chapter is just music, poetry, love. oh im ranting now arent i?

no words for how much i adore this. (:

you're a brilliant writer, whoever kendal is, my props to her. D

Wow, I totally skipped this when you published it only to come back when you post the second one-shit thing. I must say you are either one twisted... writer person or just have a pretty awesome imagination.

Read the second one as well, and found myself rereading it just to make sure I got the meaning across. It was beautifully written, gruesome, and entertaining at the same time (but only because of the author note).

Au revoir, t'ill the next update of whatever you feel like updating.

How beautiful...

Sad,but beautiful

Beautiful like all your works. I love the descriptions, they don't conform to the usual set of metaphors and similes, simply put, they're marvelous. Although a lot is still at work behind the words, it leaves the reader quite thirsty for more, but being taken in small doses complements its charm.

I didn't want to read it after glancing at the first paragraph..Sounded to prettily written...

but I eventualy did...I just liked the concept you used...

the pretty boy is actually the devil (sin, temptation..yada yada)...and the person's torn between choosing a side...

Christ didn't seem like he was gonna help and this person didn't think that he/she was fit for heaven..so this particular person chooses the pretty boy. The pretty boy makes more sense. Makes everything much easier..

Pretty damn cool concept, if you ask me..

Woah. the imagery in this is amazing. Not what I was expecting at all. I am amazed and speechless. Love.