I love the mythology references. And the writing. Hope to see an update on Eidolon soon! Or the beginning of the Redux sequel!

MK

is this like an adam and eve story?

Though there wasn't much of an explanation involved or a plot, the writing was so beautiful I couldn't NOT like this story :)

you took me away into a different universe.

You're writing is THAT good, you should be proud.

I find the story achingly beautiful.

I loved it! Your imagery is incredible. I really like the fact that it's a one-shot. I think it suits it superbly.

Ah, wow. that was different! It was interesting, I liked it. Your style was REALLY different, but so GOOD at the same time, ahha! keep it up!

Woah Myrika.

That was pretty intense.

Oh hey! It's Nikita Blaze on my new name, heh.

Interesting idea.

Missed your work anyway.

I like it.

truly interesting.

a pure methafore stoy i think, you got a way with big words, i like big words and connections to other things like the greek mythology. you know your stuff.

is Pretty Boy, Lucifer? you know, the most beautiful of all angels.

anyway! good one shot!

*eyes open really really big*

EEP!

*runs away*

oh my. that was so.. emo.

beautiful, as always. i love it. except the word 'cliche' has the accent missing?

if you don't know how to do it, it's alt-130 on the right number keypad.

good story.

-chinaberry

Interesting, descriptive and morbid - i like this very much!

Ohh this is beautiful! Much more in the vein of writing that I appreciate than your usual writing. Don't get me wrong, fluff is great and everything, but lately I've been getting a little sick of it. I've been itching for something beautifully angsty and you've served up a plate of what I believe is some of your best stuff yet. I love Eidolon and this new piece and I hope you serve up more stuff like it :)

it'd be safe to say that i don't understand this.

well, i do-remotely.

i like it, but all these little one-shots that some people write are so confusing..