 tearing hands 2007-06-28 . chapter 1My favorite part is "but i know that this has been enough- / this bleeding, crying, vomiting of imperfections". The ending is so perfect. |
 riotmaker 2007-06-17 . chapter 1this is beautiful. especially towards the ending.
♥ |
 Moon-Chaser 2007-05-27 . chapter 1Wow, I don't think that there is enough words for what this poem is. It is so honest and hopeful and sad. It is all kinds of real and confusing emotions. This is a wonderful poem and I hope that things only get better for you.
Keep it up. |
 carebear2009 2007-05-25 . chapter 1I almost cried when I read this...It remindes me so muc of what is happening between me and my Best Friend! Great Job!! |