PLEASE UPDATE SOON. Will Gavin tell him what the memories mean.

Max is quite the tempremental teen . . . I'm interested by Amy's reaction on seeing his fangs.

Livi

PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like to see what happen to max.

Fantastic vampire story! Not only do I want to know what happens next in his life, I can't wait to see how the characters reach the point in the prologue.

Livi

Ohmygod, I just got shivers down my spine!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like this story. Did max finally find another vampire?

creepy tale unfolding. poor max. being a vampire has got to come to be shock to anyone.

your story has a more dark tone, but sometimes the feel of this reminds of me of the lost boys. bits of humor and ridiculousness thrown into vampiric situation. hope you continue.

Aw, I feel so bad for him... He's so confused. I feel bad for Moira, too. She's all awkward.

Keep up the good (amazing) work!

Oh, is the Becka a vampire too?

UPDATE SOON PLEASE. When will he meet the vampires.

What I really like about this story is that you threw us a suspenseful, exciting opening to catch attention, then start building up from the beginning of the story. That's a brilliant technique.

UPDATE SOON PLEASE. When max meet gavin and the other vampire?

Oh, this has got me all suspenseful.