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| Logios Athena 2007-06-13 ch 1, | abuseBut, does he die? Is she dead? This is cool! Moo. |
| MzKit10 2007-06-04 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written. I love the use of the song, it really makes it have more impasct because it's such a simple thing. Brilliantly done. A nice ending, starting from a negative persona to a positive. Although, i think there was a sadness to the ending somehow. Very well done. Congratulations! |