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Reviews For: Twinkle Twinkle Little Star

Logios Athena
2007-06-13
ch 1,
abuseBut, does he die? Is she dead? This is cool!


Moo.
MzKit10
2007-06-04
ch 1,
abuseBeautifully written. I love the use of the song, it really makes it have more impasct because it's such a simple thing.

Brilliantly done. A nice ending, starting from a negative persona to a positive. Although, i think there was a sadness to the ending somehow. Very well done. Congratulations!
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