Reviews for End of the Beginning

Ironic Presence
2007-05-26
ch 1,

I like the title you already have.

One thing: "You've me through hell"...I think you're missing a word?

I like the "I will not be/Your puppet" line best.

I like this poem. It's very strong and resolute; kind of "hell and back with a vengeance" feel...and I mean that in a good way. Keep writing!

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