|Reviews for End of the Beginning|
| Ironic Presence 5/26/07 . chapter 1
I like the title you already have.
One thing: "You've me through hell"...I think you're missing a word?
I like the "I will not be/Your puppet" line best.
I like this poem. It's very strong and resolute; kind of "hell and back with a vengeance" feel...and I mean that in a good way. Keep writing!