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| Don'tJudgeTheGirlYouSee 2008-04-30 ch 1,  | abuseUm..I'm wondering why did you use Vietnamese not to like"Ew it's Vietnamese" because I'm Viet it's just that not a lot of people no it well answer me back:) |
| sakiikumi 2008-03-25 ch 2, | abuseI was gonna review once i finish reading but... god. This is the first femslash fic i've read cuz i didn't even know they existed... but i like it. i really do. I can relate to Jaclyn, i feel like her alot now, the confusion, and how you always have to tell your freinds 'no, no, i'm not!!' It's written well. (wish i could write as good as you...)Well. I still have to read the rest!! just had to review... Iku |
| Omok 2008-03-12 ch 23, | abuseWow =O Up date please =) short chapter, but *shrugs* good i'd say! and its a climb x too? =O |
| IrishCarBomb 2008-03-06 ch 22, | abuseLoving this story, especially given its not aralin/jacyln 24-7. Looking forward to the next update. |
| Dancer431 2008-03-06 ch 22, anon. | abuseOff to the side love intrest. Good. |
| Omok 2008-03-05 ch 22, | abuse=P Well, the long awaited up date, and this was it...*cries* at least, it was...some-what fast? o_o; *knocks head* Up date soon please =) and thank you for writing such a wonderful story? =) |
| assassin851 2008-03-04 ch 21, | abuseinteresting, Keep it up! |
| Dancer431 2008-02-28 ch 21, anon. | abuseGetting into Aralin's head; keep it going. |
| Dancer431 2008-02-24 ch 20, anon. | abuseSo story is still continuing? Not sure if I like how Aralin likes Christi. But I'll read on with whats going. |
| PrettyAwkward 2008-02-23 ch 20, | abuseYeah some parts kind've random, unanswered questions. But overall thought it was a good story. |
| Like a love sick puppy 2008-02-19 ch 19, | abusePlz update soon! This is a good story and I want it to continue! |
| Omok 2008-02-17 ch 19, | abuseand in the next few chapters those two got back together, and lived happily ever after until Jac's uncle/aunt found out. and it turns out they're both fine with it! and they all lived happily ever after, and got married when they both hit 18. *lalalalala* WAY TO NOT FINISH THE STORY! *cries* MEANIE MEANIE MEANIE MEANIE MEANIE!1 Please, up date if you can. >_ |
| dOOdle-me-PURPLE 2007-10-20 ch 19, | abuseoh man, i just found this story and its great! kinda feel sorry for jess... anyways keep it up and update! |
| IcyWindbreeze 2007-10-13 ch 19, | abuseHey great story! Just recently discovered it ^^ please update soon okay? Cause I really wanna know the rest! |
| Among-the-Vampires 2007-08-27 ch 18, | abuseIt was good. i liked what i read of it. Update soong. |