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Reviews For: A Blossom Of Pain
C.Sabbadin 2007-06-11 . chapter 1
From the way you describe her I personally don't think she would give a ** if her cuts became infected.

Others have said this but I want to emphasize the point that blood doesn't flow like water. You have to go deeply or squeeze on the wound.
narniaXisXhome 2007-06-03 . chapter 3
please keep going! i love this!
Princess Daenerys 2007-06-03 . chapter 1
You cannot draw blood that fast. She'd have to of slit the surface of a vein or cut into an artery. And though I like this story so far, there's quite a few point that makes it...unrealistic, I think.
I don't mean to be rude or anything, but this girl is just...not...real? I don't know exactly how to say it, but the washing the wounds? And if the cuts did draw blood, well, it'd sting like hell. But honestly, if you took the time to think that over for one second, you might have caught it.
I'm sorry, I just feel...odd, about this. Experience is always the best teacher.
narniaXisXhome 2007-06-01 . chapter 2
i love this story please update soon!
MellyIsSmelly 2007-05-30 . chapter 2
I love it. Keep up the good work. :D.
yinyanglim 2007-05-30 . chapter 2
French guys.. beware.. here I come.. haha..
yinyanglim 2007-05-29 . chapter 1
interesting.. can't wait to find out more about it...
fairyfiredust 2007-05-27 . chapter 1
hey i tried reveiwing this earlier but it wouldn't work!

ur putting it in as several chapters - good idea! not really much else to say as i said it all earlier when u sent me the draft! just thought i'd put ur review count up ;)
narniaXisXhome 2007-05-26 . chapter 1
yay! finally a story about emos! please write more soon!
MellyIsSmelly 2007-05-25 . chapter 1
Mm, it's nice. But I'd like to point out that you couldn't possible bleed that fast unless, you know, you hit an artery. The blood springs forward, but it takes a few seconds. And you'd kind of have to stand there for awhile for the blood to drip down. Just wanted to point it out from my own experience. xP.
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