OMG keep writing! sorry i don't have anything more... i dunno... helpful to say, but keep writing! XD

Aw... They're so cute.

I think one of my favorite things about this is the way Altair speaks, because I have a friend who's only been in America a year-and-a-half, and that's /exactly/ how he talks, though his primary language is Spanish rather than French.

From the comment about Julian's five-thousand-dollar, perfect teeth, I take it he's had braces. Oh, I can identify. (grins, and braces are clearly visible)

The most interesting part of this story is probably the way Altair and Julian interact - the way power/control switches, back and forth, back and forth. Neither of them particularly fluster each other (unlike what a /certain/ guy I know does to me on a regular basis... I swear!), and I loved how Altair switches from suave and oh-so-composed to nervous.

My favorite part was the last line: /very/ proud. Now /that/ was adorable, and more than a little amusing.

LOL! Julian is an IMP tonight!

Teasing poor Altair? LOL! Julian, you rogue!

Michael is loser boyfriend, I can't believe Julian fell for him! But I like Altair, if seems like a better guy for Julian. Keep up the writing, I'm looking forward to chapter four ^^

Why would you disappoint me? You've created a great bunch of characters.

I really like this!

Nice start. Interested in seeing how it develops from here. Hope to see more soon.