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Reviews For: You Face the Heat

kiwi289
2008-06-29
ch 1,
Again, a very powerful poem. Amazing work.

kiwi
half-sketched.staccatos
2007-05-29
ch 1,
konichiwa

Guess who! LoL. I'm in computer class right now and supremely bored (I hope my teacher doesn't read this *wink*). Anyway, I decided to see if the school had blocked fictionpress. Guess what -- it didn't! (Too bad they blocked fanfiction *sigh*)

Anyway, another wonderful poem. "Grief is all we're allowed to know/but you never, never let it show..." -- That was so sad!

I liked the line "Demon children in the devil's den." *shrug* I can't explain whyu; I just did. Anyway, I'd better send this before my teacher comes around ...

Zaijen
-Shan-
Cookie Jar
2007-05-25
ch 1,
These could be the lyrics to a very loud song couldn't they? Are you talking about G.Bush when you say 'burning bush'? Or is that just...bleh. Well, it's good. Btw, could you please review Secrets of Storms by C. Shells? I'd really appreciate it. The link is:-


fictionpress. com/ s/ 2356039/ 1/
(Just remove the blanks between the dot and slashes)
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