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Reviews For: The Line Of Gold

Kohl Smeared Soulmate
2008-09-14
ch 1,
This was really beautiful, I loved the way it came full circle in terms of imagery.
kanari kireteru doll
2007-06-10
ch 1,
I must say, I adore the imagry in your writings; you don't see a lot of well-written imagry like you've used here. Please, keep it up.

-Helena Emma
Yoko-sempai
2007-05-27
ch 1,
Really sweet, I liked it. I don't normally read stories written in second person, but this one was well-written. Keep up the good work.
Megas Alexandros
2007-05-27
ch 1,
You can't hide... I'm actually beginning to love this story.
KissMyConverse
2007-05-26
ch 1,
I really enjoyed this. There's enough depth to it, but not so much that I'm like, "GOD! SHUT UP!" :]
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