This was really beautiful, I loved the way it came full circle in terms of imagery.

I must say, I adore the imagry in your writings; you don't see a lot of well-written imagry like you've used here. Please, keep it up.

-Helena Emma

Really sweet, I liked it. I don't normally read stories written in second person, but this one was well-written. Keep up the good work.

You can't hide... I'm actually beginning to love this story.

I really enjoyed this. There's enough depth to it, but not so much that I'm like, "GOD! SHUT UP!" :]