Reviews for Eat Your Heart Out

NightmareWriter 2007-11-28 ch 4,	Stop saying that it's lame, 'cause it's not! I'm a constant reader of Supernatural stories, and yours isn't lame. I like this chapter by the way, makes me want to know what is in the little black box.
urbanfictionalist 2007-11-27 ch 4,	you shouldnt doubt your writing. it's good i liked it. my only suggestion is to slow the chpaters a bit. you seem to be rushing them a bit. and you could also try to make the chapters a bit longer. You also have a few spelling erros. but other than that i enjoyed reading them i hope you update soon. -urbanfictionalist
NightmareWriter 2007-11-26 ch 3,	It's not a lame chapter! I like how Kirsten likes to torcher(sp?) Riley.
NightmareWriter 2007-11-26 ch 2,	Why is she so calm? I would be flipping out!
NightmareWriter 2007-11-26 ch 1,	Here's a good question she needs to ask herself, how did he know her name? From her brother? I have a bad feeling about this.
Stang65 2007-06-11 ch 2,	Exciting and dramatic! I like it really well. Please update soon!
The Jade Tipster 2007-05-29 ch 1,	Aww, it's not lame. It's actually pretty good. I wonder what happens next...