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Reviews For: Don’t Tell Me What to Do

Twilight Starr
2007-10-14
ch 1,
abuseGood poem although the cursing isn't necessary to get your point across.

~Twilight Starr~
concerto49
2007-08-11
ch 1,
abuseOuch. I could feel the pain.
Yeah, some people like to be free and not bossed around. We have our own ways!
It got a bit crazy towards the middle. Hm. I wonder.
Hm. It was really angst, and felt a bit scary towards the end.
What's going on? What happened to it?
Anyhow. Cheers.
amc623
2007-06-10
ch 1,
abusejust thought you might want to know that you've posted a poem in the fiction section. Might get more reviews if you move it to poetry.
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