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| Twilight Starr 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseGood poem although the cursing isn't necessary to get your point across. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| concerto49 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseOuch. I could feel the pain. Yeah, some people like to be free and not bossed around. We have our own ways! It got a bit crazy towards the middle. Hm. I wonder. Hm. It was really angst, and felt a bit scary towards the end. What's going on? What happened to it? Anyhow. Cheers. |
| amc623 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abusejust thought you might want to know that you've posted a poem in the fiction section. Might get more reviews if you move it to poetry. |