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Reviews For: Forgotten

Unknown Survivor 2008-01-02 ch 1,	Lovely. The imagery is very strong. Keep up the good work. ~Unknown Survivor~
The Cowardly Lion 2007-12-30 ch 1,	I keep getting reviewed throttle or some ** like that. I read this before but I never revied it. I liked it. It's dark and morbid and absolutely beautiful.
Jackibelle 2007-07-19 ch 1,	Wow. Just, wow, its great. Together or by themselves, either way works.
The Jynx of Kari 2007-06-01 ch 1,	Apart and together. . . they sound good otherwise. That's awesome. You know, I really need to get back on ficpress and sort everything out because there's poems I haven't reviewed [tho I could've sworn I did] and poems to read and --i'm a busy bee ain't i? lol, J/K, J/K lol.
Black And Silver Stars 2007-05-26 ch 1,	I like this. Espescially the way it rhymes but it doesn't seem like it had to be like that.
The Postscript 2007-05-26 ch 1,	Beautiful. I liked the first stanza and then the third stanza the best. The first because it illustrates the savageness of humans. It's something real - not just in an abstract form - like the way in which cars slow down and the scene of an accident because they have curiosity for blood, hurt, and pain. And I thought the third was well written because of the various ideas incorporated almost flawlessly. Great work. Keep writing, k.