A very good chapter, but you have some grammar errors.

This story looks as though it's off to a god start but I caught some mistakes:

“To me my fantasy’s
Should be fantasies, fantasy's is more like saying fantasy is.

ember hair
Ember is a small remnant of a fire, do you mean amber?

“It’s Kishi Mickey,”
Needs to be revised to “It’s Kishi, Mickey,”

“Bye Mickey See ya in the morning!”
missing puntuation.

‘Why’s he gotta call me that!’
needs to have a ? at the end or you could put ?!

On another not, I probably won't be reading the rest because everything is in the present tense and I'm not comfortable reading in that tense. Also your character seems to have quite the mout , you may want to tone it down a bit.

This story is AWESOME! XD

This is a well-told story, and it's a little sad that it has no reviews. I'm adding you to my story alerts so I can give you proper reviews. That's actually saying a lot for me, since I'm picky about a lot of things.

Marvelous job!

Perhaps you could read some of my works sometime. I'd love to see what you thought of them.