An interesting story indeed. It's nice to find something that's yaoi or shounen ai here. This was enjoyable and I liked the plot that you gave it. You also have likable characters.

I also write am a fellow shounen-ai/yaoi writer. If you want to check out my works, feel free. I'd love to know what you think. My newest story Sacrifice is a shounen-ai story I haven't put any yaoi into it, but I'm thinking about it.

soz it took me so long to R&R i haven't checked my emails for like... ages :D i like this chap.. like i like all chaps... hurry up with the next one kay? seeya

i read all the chaps it is good :) hurry up with the next chap