crazy good stuff :]

i like the part about 11:11

olivia, you're still one of the best writers i know

The word connection of, "godpleasegod", works so well in this to speed up the wish-thought to the speed that many think in when hoping for such things. I especially like the line break you've given in the last two lines. It halts the reader at just the right place of inflection. Well crafted. MD:77.