Did christian ever get his sight back or as he blind forever?

I enjoyed the way you weaved this fairytale-esque story, and I strangely liked the portrait you painted of The Witch. If not liked, then at least found it very interesting. All in all, I had fun reading this, although it felt as if some threads of the story were forgotten or disregarded.

I was almost 100 per cent sure that Alexis would take Christian *home*, in the desert! I wonder if he got to heal Christian's sight...it would be great for him to be able to see Alexis again!! This was a great story all in all!! Thank you for sharing it C:

Oh god, I love this story!! It's so sad, yet beautiful! I really hope Alexis and Christian will meet again at some point...And yes, the dolls creep me out a bit too, just like Noa! But their names are brilliant!!

Wow, this story is ingenious! I really couldn't see who Alexis would end up in the legendary tower, since The Witch actually loved him, but you just made it work! I love the way you write!!

Oh my God! This first chapter was unbelievably amazing!! I felt drowning in the story and there were parts of it that made me shiver! It was so well written!! I just have to read the next chapters now!!

P.S. I loved the way you didn't name the child's parents, only called them 'The Man' and 'The Woman'!

I like the story a lot, especially the cast of characters ans settings. I loved the dialogue and your summarizing skills are really good! - because many times in the story, there had to be summation, like the earlier years of Alexis's life or suchlike. That was well-written.
Only that the plot towards the end and the middle was sort of unpredictable...the ending was much too fast, in my opinion. And the prince didn't really have depth to him. Also, I was left curious what happened to the girl who like Alexis, and the healer who liked the prince.
:) but overall, I loved it. Really, very creative.
-sarsaparilla

This has been a very great story! Although the ending does leave me wondering: did Christian get his sight back? Anyways, again, excellent writing!

im only on the second chapter but its absolutely wonderful
& greatly detailed. i love it!

I just loved this story! I was so sad when they parted, and they thought that they other was dead, that just pulled my heart in such a mournful way. I'm so glad that they got back together! Did Christian ever get his sight back? Cuz on the Rapunzel story, when she wept, the prince got his sight back, kinda silly, but I was wondering, since you kept this story much like Rapunzel, that maybe you would do that also. Anyways I loved this story so much, you did an awesome job at it! :D

Your reason for giving up the baby makes more sense than any I’ve heard before and casts the parents in a much better light.

The Prince is really a prick, but I guess he grows on me. Where does the sex scene (ch 4) fit it? Before Christian pushes Alexis away or after? Oh, ok.

I feel so sorry for Edmund. When he died, the kingdom lost a great man.

It does make more sense for the exiled one to come home than for the blind one to wander.

Very nice.

This was an amazing read. I know this is your 99th review and you've probably heard this many times before, but thank you for that amazing experience. Your flow of writing, your vocabulary, your choice of characters and time period, everything fits so perfectly and I found nothing to be cliche or predictable. I enjoyed this story very very much.

i love the angst.
And no matter how much I dislike love triangles, I like how it was used here. It gives out so much tense...

there's so much emotion in this chapter. LOVE IT!
And at least there is a reasonable reason why 'Rapunzel' had to be locked up in a tower. ;3

you made a prologue of a parody worth reading. Good job!