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| rayray 2008-09-30 ch 8, anon. | abusewonderful take on a classic fairytale, but i must say, i really disliked the ending. it just seemed kind of weak. |
| eurtreve 2008-09-20 ch 8,  | abusevery well written. |
| Wittyilynamed 2008-09-14 ch 8, | abuseOh...oh my. That was...magnificent. Fantastic. Beautiful. Wonderfully well written and very unique. I'm so excited to see if you've written other stories. I mean, it was sad but profound, and I loved it. It was an interesting writing style. I'm not sure if that's just how you write or if it was just for this story, but whatever it was, I loved it. |
| Duuude 2008-09-09 ch 8, | abuseI always thought this story was sad. But I loved the way you made it! It was AMAZING! I loved the ending, the characters, the beauty. It was awesome. Thanks for writing this. =) |
| immovinout 2008-08-30 ch 8, | abuseWonderful! :) |
| PindrakeCake 2008-08-25 ch 8, | abuseC: Aw, that was lovely. |
| D's Silly G 2008-08-20 ch 8, | abuseaww make me cry why don't yea. great story, i loved the way you added in hings like glass slippers and the 'dolls'. also the kid who was like him when he was young, that was sweet.very well done and just a great story. even though the end was a happy one it was still sad, even where they ended up where they both would have loved to see trees and such i'm sure. i do like how you ended it with they had fights and one had to die before the other, which would be most times true yet never mentioned in stories, but that they loved eachother very much. it was rather wonderful :) |
| JtheChosen1 2008-08-19 ch 8, | abuseexcellent story! it was truly amazing! |
| Tinyyellowboxes 2008-08-15 ch 8, | abuseBEST FANFICTION I'VE EVER READ! HANDS DOWN! You could turn that into a book and sell millions. It was amazing. If i wasn't already dating someone i might just ask you to marry me because this story was THAT good. You know what screw it marry me! Please, please, please keep writing amazing yaoi, because you're amazing! |
| deuteriuM Xtreme 2008-08-02 ch 8, | abuseSomehow I like the opening chapters and the epilogue more than the meatier, central parts of this story. I also think 'smashing(ly)' is a little -too- modern in this fable/fairytale context. But that's just me, though. ^^ |
| weisen1 2008-07-28 ch 8, anon. | abuseReally beautifully written. With just enough details sprinkled in all the right places. ... still sad you killed Edmund though :( |
| Lovedward48 2008-07-26 ch 8, anon. | abuseI like it very much! Good job!! |
| HeavensInferno 2008-07-25 ch 8, | abuseThis is one of the sweetest stories ever. I felt sad and happy and every emotion a good story is supposed to make you feel. |
| RubyXSerpent 2008-07-25 ch 8, | abuseGreat story! :D Really well written; I love your style. I enjoyed reading it a lot! :D |
| i-see-faeries 2008-07-23 ch 8, | abuseAw, how cute. I never liked the story of Repunzle, but I like this. Great job! Loves. |