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| Bonnie 2008-05-10 ch 8, anon. | abuseAll I can say is 'wow'. That was really awesome. I love fics written in this fairytale kind of way. I had tears in my eyes when it was mentioned that Christian couldn't remember what Alexis's face looked like. It was really powerful, and I loved it. |
| jadeviper 2008-04-27 ch 8,  | abuseThis has to be the sweetest story I've ever read on FictionPress^^ The way you wrote this story was absolutely beautiful it made me fall in love with fairy tales all over again:D |
| Anaita 2008-04-09 ch 8, | abuseA brilliant piece of the imagination. Wonderful writing. Good characters. I loved how the story flowed and how some characters the readership doesn't get attached to like The Witch because of the anonymity and because of that it's easier to resent her. Does that make sense? I dunno. Very well done. |
| Kitsune Luvr 2008-04-06 ch 8, anon. | abuseAww. So simple. And so sweet. Amazingly touching. Loved it. Keep up the writing. |
| Choice 2008-04-04 ch 8, | abuseThis fairytale was amazingly written. Great job! (: |
| PoertyQueen 2008-04-01 ch 8, | abuseOMG I loved this it was great a perfect twist on an old story |
| Blithe 2008-03-03 ch 8, anon. | abuseBeautiful! I really enjoyed reading this; thanks so much. |
| Blithe 2008-03-03 ch 3, anon. | abuseWhat attitude they both have. Isn't it a little odd, though, that the court is all excited over The Prince when he only goes on his excursions once every three months? And only twice so far, too. |
| Blithe 2008-03-03 ch 2, anon. | abuse" But he couldn't help but think that, crazy or not, his mother had done a good and thorough job." Neither of them do anything by halves, do they? (laughs) Again, I enjoyed it. I'm not normally the type to review every chapter, but I think I will for this. I'm in total awe. |
| Blithe 2008-03-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseAmazing...I love your writing. However, I do think that a chronological structure would be better. I don't mind time-hopping, but with fairytales, I tend to like the chronological sequence better. I think that's mostly just my personal preference, though. |
| magalina 2008-02-27 ch 8, | abuse:_: I loved it. And I'm happy you wrote en epilogue. I thought the prince got his sight back on the original story...but I'm not sure. Lovely story :D |
| S. Cherise 2008-02-26 ch 8, anon. | abuseThat was an amazing story. I happen to be in a play which partially encorporates the story of rapunzel and so I enjoyed this even more! =) great job. |
| Naatz 2008-02-22 ch 8, | abuseI enjoyed this very much. The style was clear and complex, the characters developed well, and the writing itself was simply good. Thank you for writing this! |Meduza| |
| The Cruel Irony 2008-02-16 ch 8, | abuseAww, that was so cute. I really loved this story, definitely one of the better ones on this site, if not one of the best. Great, great job on this. xox Irony |
| Rora 2008-02-15 ch 8, anon. | abuseAw, so cute! This was such a great fairytale. |