Yay, you mentioned me. :)

I wonder if the prince will be able to get back out, though...

Oh so so good and so clever the way it starts and ends with the traditional Rapunzel. And the little links, like the way he finds the spell for the brambles. So delightfully clever.

Can't wait until the next chapter.

Xx

I love his name! Alexis..._ He's so cute too! I love his hair...he's awesome.

It's funny that he kissed carl, but not even a year (about a year maybe) before he beat the shit out of him lol.

I Can't believe she did that to him! Just because he kissed a boy! (XD)If someone doesn't save him soon (hint hint) I will!

Anybody know where i can get a very tall ladder?

That was... amazing ;_; I love this. I thought you were going to make Alexis the vulnerable and cute kind of character but I love him like this! XO

I liked that little peek to the future you put there. XD

I cant even write everything I loved of this cause itll take me forever :P

But amazing amazing. Love it and hope you update soon!

This is an amazing twist to Rapunzel. I love it! Course, I thought that the real mother wanted rapunzel from the garden, which is a type of lettuce. And Alexis isn't really close to Rapunzel, but whatever. UPDATE SOON!

Lovely.

Seriously, I dug the first chapter to extremes and now this. It pretty much owns me at this point, but we'll get to that later.

For one, I am amazed at how you keep the pacing and the fairy-tale feel to it even though you skip ahead a few years (personally, I would have liked some more description on baby Alexis and The Whitch but, meh, inferences and hints are good enough). It still retains the same stylistic feel from the first chapter and I still pitty the poor Whitch, though I feel you are probably going to kill her and/or make her uber evil but, meh.

My deepest sympathies go to his parents, too, because it seems just too cruel to loose a child.

Oh, and did I mention how much I LOVE the slash in this? Alexis and Carl's kiss was made of hot, and everyone probably knows this, and just his whole fight with his mother:

"“Clothes are nothing. I'm not a girl; I don't need to go all covered up. In fact, I could go naked, even.”

“You bad boy, I forbid you to go naked. What would the villagers think? They'll be scandalized.”

“Not all of them. Old man Franz would love it; people say he's got a taste for young boys.”

“What! Why would you listen to what people say? It's all rumor and gossip, things those no-good women who have nothing to do pass around.”

“It is true. I've seen him looking at me sometimes.”

“That's disgusting, Alexis, and I don't want you to go anywhere near him, naked or clothed, if that's true.”"

'Cause it is made out of extreme cute and, oh.

Uber love to this:

"“Where’re you going, Alexandra?”

Alexis ignored the blatant feminization of his name. “Home. So get out of my way.”

“Going home to dear mommy?”

“No, you nitwit. Going home to my ogre slave driver.”

Carl sneered. “Your mother’s not too far from an ogre, you know. With those looks—”"

That whole scene just, literally, made me choke on what I was eating. Oh, clever boys.

Lovely chapter, I honeslty can't wait for more. (Seriously, I can't.)

- as beauty dies

Hehe, I'm reviewing simply so that you get more reviews. :D I really loved the chapter. Shows nice progression of time.

yay for updates! Poor Alexis : ( Love the story btw.

Ooh this is really good! The poor man and woman... I wonder what's going to happen with the child and the witch. From the summary, the child's going to be the 'damsel' locked in the tower, but the witch said she'd treat him well! So why would she do that? Lied again? :(

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I just have to say this: I am blown away.

And this is just the first chapter. I am correct, right? (Please tell me this isn't a one shot. Please tell me this isn't a one shot...)

Anyway, I adore this.

I adore the pacing. It feels very fairy-tale like to me and is just, all around, amazingly done. I really love it.

Also, I'm really digging the backround you wove into this. The reasons are concrete and lend to sympathy rather than anger, and I feel bad for the child, the parents, and the whitch, which I guess I shouldn't but you make it hard not to.

Oh, and before I forget: "A poison created to gain a child."

That will probably become my favorite line ever because it constricted my heart and made me cry. Good job, really.

Oh man, I really hope this isn't a one-shot and that you are planning more because, um, I see no slash. XD

Anyway, this review is getting too fan-girly for me. This is all I am left to say: I love this. A lot.

- as beauty dies

Ohh, it has started out very nicely. I can't wait to see how this turns out, seeing as it's a slash and all.

Good job!

yay, I love fairy tales! You did a good job of fitting so much info all in one chapter. I can't wait till the next update!

I really liked this story, you wrote it pretty well, too. It made sense. When's the next one gonna be here?

omgomgomg! A long story! And the writings great as always ;_; Im so happy. I can not wait for the next chapter!

I have those books too (theyre 3 right?) and they translated Rapuzel as Raponchingo or something like that O.O It took all the drama away, I tell you. I kept laughing every time I read that name.

But omgomg! A long story! Yay! Update soon! .

Yay, I like it! More soon please?

And I thought you said you'd let me beta?