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| salvagedstars 2008-03-28 ch 1,   | Your story's great. You were able to get the point across despite the length. :) |
| adventureseeker 2007-05-27 ch 1, | Ooh, I really like this. I love how you show the underlying tension without be obvious, having them particularly sniping (heh) at each other or anything. I also like the way you give us some picture of their individual personalities, just through their little gestures and descriptions of their thoughts. Marvelous. Keep up the good work. |