Zomg

this story is lyke, so good!

PLz WrITe MOAR

jkjk

our fanfic takes precedence.

Amazing.

I friggin love it.

AND seamus.

I love liam too, but i think he's just too perfect.

Idk, i just like liam better.

God im obsessed with cliches.

Its crazy.

Seriously, cliches are my favorites.

Especially the brothers bet friend ones xD

I can't wait to read more. I loved your characters. They all have different personalities. Keep up the good work!

Ok so I love the story so far. Its a plot that has been done but you make it different somehow. Only one suggestion UPDATE!

Aw...where have you gone? This is really good! Please update...

loved it!

Um...helo why would you do that to a person? Ya left me hanging PLEASE finish like today I have to know what is gonna happen? I love Seamus...

i look like addy lol

aghghghhgh... UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

i NEED to know what happens!

update soon!

So i really completely fell in love with this story. I wish you would update soon, it's fantastic!

okay, i have completely fallen inlove with this story-don't stop now!

please

Yeah, it's a bit of a cliché and that sets me off the plot a bit. But then, you acknowledged that it was a cliché, so I guess that's all right. Addy is the most overdone, though. It's funny when Addy kicked him in the shin! Take that! I can see some of this stuff happening and your characterization is superb. Except for the clichés, of course. The plot is also clichéd but I think you'll find some way to put a twist to it. If you don't, you'll have to work on it because there is no way it's possible to have a perfect life. Or always have a happily-ever-after ending. Anyway, I think this story has AWESOME potential(Let's be honest. Is there anything of yours that doesn't have at least that?)despite certain things as mentioned above.

WRITE MORE OR ELSE:)

well now I'm off to the mall

and then I'm going to the play at our school

But I wanna like read everything

Yeyeye!

"typical teenage party"

Wow well I guess I don't go to the right parties!

Lmao.

Trying on something skanky.

I've done that...