love the story
update asap

hey love your story, please update soon.

jamie

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It's good, just explain and elaborate on things next chapter. Like their reaction afterward, how Missy acts now that she has reigning superiourity(evil step, etc...) and if this story is going where i think it's going, give Shane a bit of a darker past. Love it. Magnifique!

hey nice story.i like the fact that evan is an overprotective brother that is so sweet.he cares for her.i hope he doesnt let any of his friends break her heart or anything.well please update soon!

Great story so far. It's really good. Write more soon!

you have a crazy cousin cause this story is awesome! i really love it! i love her sarcasm and everything else about her! missy is...how can i describe her...not quite barbie...more like barbie meets hooker. no offence. cant wait for more! update soon!

P.S. I might be able to help if you want for the editor thing. :)

I actually liked this chapter..it sounds as an interesting story
update soon!! ^^

Hey, this is a good story so far. It got me hooked. I don't really like the dad's girlfriend scenario though cause she sounds really annoying, haha. I liked the line where Evan said "please feed me." I can tell this story has a lot of potential, so keep us updated :-)

love it... update soon

heh
i love cliche stories
=D
they make me happy
yea
i noticed there was this one spot where you put 'loose' instead of lose
but you know, thats ok =D
i think you constructed the story pretty well
keep going!
xoxox