ok this was good but it was a bit choppy, i guess how it depends how a person reads it but it bothers me. otherwise it was well written

i am absolutely in love with the fact that you keep adding chapters to this story. they keep on getting better and better

aww this is really beautiful!

Wow, that was really amazing. It made me remember this past December. Your description was so unbelievably beautiful. What you wrote about the darkness was so true. "Everything is beautiful, when you look into the midnight sky." That line is so true (I seriously live for the night time. I'm always awake until four...).

Anyway, I really wanted to thank you for your review. I can't tell you how much it meant to me. That song's lyrics gave me chills. I'm planning on listening to it soon, don't worry :). Writing always makes me feel better.

Keep up the great work!

i love this one too! it's even better now that you put it into a poemy thing