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| Lizzy-Lou 2007-05-28 ch 1,  | abuseYES! I love it Mindy! And I love you! |
| Elegant Raven 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseI liked it, but grammatically, this needs some help. When you spelled your, you meant you're. Also, firends is spelled Friends. I liked this poem. It connects with the reader and this is an everyday situation people see everyday. ^_^ You might like my poetry. You should check it out some time ^_^. Everyone's favorite seems to be "Upon My Beloved's Grave". |
| meaninglessTears 2007-05-26 ch 1, | abusehey i actually like this poem since it brings back old memories and i can relate to it. very well written and i like returning favors ^-^ keep writing |