YES! I love it Mindy! And I love you!

I liked it, but grammatically, this needs some help.
When you spelled your, you meant you're. Also, firends is spelled Friends. I liked this poem. It connects with the reader and this is an everyday situation people see everyday. ^_^ You might like my poetry. You should check it out some time ^_^. Everyone's favorite seems to be "Upon My Beloved's Grave".

hey i actually like this poem since it brings back old memories and i can relate to it. very well written and i like returning favors ^-^ keep writing