 Elegant Raven 2007-05-27 . chapter 1I liked it, but grammatically, this needs some help.
When you spelled your, you meant you're. Also, firends is spelled Friends. I liked this poem. It connects with the reader and this is an everyday situation people see everyday. ^_^ You might like my poetry. You should check it out some time ^_^. Everyone's favorite seems to be "Upon My Beloved's Grave". |