|Reviews for I Miss You|
| Angela Nichole 8/13/08 . chapter 1
This is really good! Keep up the good work! :)
| LiberryBooked 5/26/07 . chapter 1
I like the way that you spaced the poem as a whole. The lines (that put up with all my condescension, my lying) becomes so much better my the spacing. But I don't think that the last line ends the poem appropriately. I thought I misread it, and that it was suppose to read I miss you, love, or I miss you, my love. I think that it needs a bit more closure, but other than that it is good.
| Manuel Fajar 5/26/07 . chapter 1
You captured it all here. Sounds so simple, yet how complicated. Nicely done. m
p.s. If you ever figure out the spacing issue, let me know I've just given up!