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If I don't
firemounrain
2007-05-26 . chapter 1
It makes me think about the sound of one hand clapping.
If there are two answers to one question- huh. I like that one.
Xalga
2007-05-26 . chapter 1
No verse but that's normal I think. I like the simple changes of numbers and words (two and 2). The last line is a good bow at the end of it. Keep writing.
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