 xkissxmexalreadyx 2009-11-30 . chapter 18I just read the whole story! and i love it! i'm sorry i didn't review every chapter. =/ but i still loved it! and the music that was a really cool thing to do, have a soundtrack and all. yupp, i'm rambling... sorry. oh well, great job! =] |
 Brnn 2009-11-16 . chapter 7'Emery and Me' is pretty wizard from what I can tell this far in. I'm really excited to continue reading. Your characters are awesome, they have a lot of depth. I also really enjoy the way you drop hints. |
 bloodyxnightmares 2009-11-16 . chapter 16i love tegan and sara! love the music selection. |
 bloodyxnightmares 2009-11-16 . chapter 12okay so i had the feeling the infamous jacky was emery ever since he was mention. and the whole overprotective girlfriend thing makes me 90% positive that he is infact jacky. |
 bloodyxnightmares 2009-11-16 . chapter 4whats the deal with amber and emery? and why is amber like super jealous of bronwyn? argh! usually im very good at predicting stories but this one is a little harder to guess. i have an idea of what going to happen but idk... |
 CharismaAlexis7432 2009-11-16 . chapter 18I LOVED this story & I'm so sorry tht I ddnt review the other chapters :( I hope u can 4give me |
 Pinay 2009-11-12 . chapter 18 That was a really enjoyable read. Thanks! |
 Jinxed Rogue 2009-11-08 . chapter 18I really like your ending. You took a typical cliche, added another few, and turned it into something sweetly different. Your characters were more towards "real" than the "archetypal" that usually come with this story. There were no grandiose declarations and it was a lot like watching something happen in high school.
I think you need to clean it up a bit, there were a few typos with spelling and punctuation. Also, you can make some of the narrative a little clearer.
Overall, this was a worthwhile and enjoyable read. :) |
 Jinxed Rogue 2009-11-08 . chapter 13The one thing I've been curious about is why Wyn is keeping all of this to herself. Andrea is there and I'm surprised they don't talk about Amber's promise and insecurities. |
 Jinxed Rogue 2009-11-08 . chapter 12This has got to be one of the most original love triangles I have ever seen. It's interesting that a lot of it is more about the sisters' relationship and less about Wyn falling for Emery, which though she has a crush on him I don't see as an epic threat to Amber. |
 MAGZ 2009-11-08 . chapter 1 This is my all time favorite story. Its sad how much in love with Emery I am. I want a guy like him for myself! I'm so happy you wrote it and reread it all the time. Sometimes I get a little envious of Bronny, which is very very sad. I just want to thank you for writing this!
I Love It!
Margaret S. |
 honey splattered brains 2009-11-02 . chapter 16aw. wynn doesnt want to be with emery cause she would be betraying her sister and she loves her sister no matter what even though she likes him a lot. and cobe doesnt want to be with wynn because he would be betraying his brother even though he likes her a lot. D: |
 honey splattered brains 2009-11-02 . chapter 15no cobe but i llike cobe COBE |
 honey splattered brains 2009-11-02 . chapter 10i want to kill amber. shes such a little lying selfish **. oh and a poser. winnie x emery forever. |
 Your Execution 2009-10-28 . chapter 18I almost missed the bus to read this chapter but i tihnk it was worth it. I love this story, is was so awsome :D |