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| theslykit 2008-05-08 ch 18,  | abusegreat story!! :D |
| abitterkiss. 2008-05-08 ch 10, | abuseHOLY CRAP. THE 88. I love, love, love that song. All 'Cause of You? Meh. I love you more now. |
| thoughtsofwisdom 2008-05-05 ch 18, | abuseAw. i told you i'd get hooked and now i'm done. at the beginning of chapter 17 i thought it was gonna be one of those stories wiht the sucky endings, buti was really glad when everything worked out. they really are too cute together and matt was just hilarious and nathan too and bronwynn was really awesome even if her sister was a right ** as Andrea said. overall i loved this story and poor Cobe who is sucha sweetheart. So yeah, i'm kinda free now, unless ofcourse i go and read another one of your stories... |
| randieskins 2008-05-05 ch 18, | abuseAw. < I loved this story so much. (: I read it all in one night. and this story is just like me and my sister. She's just like me. (Bronwyn) and I'm glad they got to together. (Bronwyn and Emery) (: Hehe. |
| thoughtsofwisdom 2008-05-04 ch 3, | abuseoh, i get it the sister thinks they'd be perfect for each other so she doens't want them to meet. oh. so the love triangle is among the 2 sisters and emery. i realy like it now, i hope i dont fail my exam |
| thoughtsofwisdom 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseI have exams in a couple days and i found your story and now i jus bet im gonna get hooked. i loved this first chapter and i totally do the same thing [listen to a song, like it, write down the lyrics and then search the name and title to download it]. like i said i loved it. |
| Mitchy 2008-05-03 ch 18, | abusewonderfully written...loved it to pieces.Ü |
| .J0ana. 2008-05-01 ch 8, | abuseyou wrote this story like 6 months ago, but i was wondering something. at the beginning of the story you wrote that Amber was older. in the last chapter, she says that now shes a senior, so why is Amber in the same school? shouldn't she be in college if she's older? or are they both seniors and if so how does that work? |
| rachely 2008-04-30 ch 18, | abusethis was cute :) |
| rachely 2008-04-29 ch 3, | abusedidn't get very far yet but i like it so far. excited to read the rest of it =) |
| Ambergirl1029 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abusehello, since i have read your story and loved it can you do me the itsy bitsy favor of reading my first ever, baby story I Am Brandy Williams thank you, Amber |
| krazed.hypa.ivii 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseL O V E I T!! |
| funnechick 2008-04-26 ch 18, | abuseAH-MAZING! This story is just that...amazing! I know it's been awhile since you finished it, last year actually, but I just read it and it was so freaking fantastic that I couldn't go without giving it a review. I love the characters so much, especially Bronwyn, Emery, and Matt (haha, he was hi-larious). And of course the relationships that can never be, always seem to be the most intoxicating and exciting to read. For awhile I didn't really think this could have a happy ending, I just didn't see Amber ever giving up on Emery or Bronwyn ever being okay with actually getting with him. But I'm so glad you made it happen. The journey of reading this was amazing...gah, I'm using that word a lot, aren't I? And you completely deserve all the praise and success you've gotten from writing this story. |
| eclipse-of-the-suns 2008-04-17 ch 16, | abuseaw, i love this story!11 it's like the third time i've read it it rules! anyhoo, keep smiling, it's good for ya cool over and out |
| Arista Ramabra 2008-04-17 ch 16, | abuse"“Down there,” she told me grumpily, waving a hand in the air before returning to her work. I made a face. In a general That Way direction, huh? I thought," by any chance were u referencing pirates when u said that? great story |