can you cyber-punch amber for me? please? and why is she trying to be so different? gah! woot, fellow aussie! loll love it!

LOL at Matt :L love the story!

Yea! That was awesome!

i loved this story, but i felt really bad for the sister :)

When I first started this story, I wasn't sure about it. I don't know either, but when I realized, pretty quickly I might add, that my fears were definitely unfounded.

I loved Matt and his quirkiness. And I loved how Bronwyn felt like a character that I could relate to. I don't have a sister, so I don't know exactly how she was feeling, but I had the same feelings about friends ex-boyfriends, so we have some common ground.

There were so many things right with this story, and I could go on pretty much forever, but that would take awhile. So, suffice to say I ended up loving this.

Squee! I loved this story so much. I was first unsure about whether it would be good or not, bit after the couple chapters, I was hooked. Finished it all today.

aww so cute :) great ending!

aw i love this story so much!

I can't believe it's over, what a great ending though.

I totally did NOT suspect Emery to be Cobe and Opal's brother.

Great story, glad a read it.

Well done :D

I love this story :D

sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel DO IT

By the by so nice to read a very well written sotry buy an amazing australian author )

Let me start of by mentioning I hate love triangles. Their awkward, painful to read as someone is always left hurt in the end and usually the contenders are really endearing and likeable characters, therefore making it impossible to finish the story content that everyone got their happy ending. HOWEVER, I really liked this story. The expectation and the fate-like circumstances of Emery and Bronwyn's relationship made the conclusion of this story more than acceptable. People like Cobe and Amber were left broken and sort of alone, but they could accept that their siblings relationship was meant to be. I had been meaning to read this story and I was glad I did. The chemistry throughout the story was exemplary. I like that the story also revolved around the relationship between the sisters. Many people were disgusted and intollerant of Amber's behaviour, but I could see where she was coming from. She really liked him and wanted the relationship to work between herself and Emery. It may have been a very selfish act in keeping Emery and her sister apart but in the end she acceptes where relationship with him is at. I thought it was also really respectful of Bronwyn, to attempt to keep out of her sister's relationship. It was a selfless act and real illustration of how she didn't want to alienate her sister further. One little portion of criticism: I think in the begining it could be worthwhile, elaborating on Bronwyn's social life. Amber complained that she never saw her sister, and when I read that story I don't remember ever reading about Bronwyn standing up her sister or being not present for family activities. I don't think you wanted to make it seem Amber fabricated the lies (at least from my perspective). But let me just say that this story is amazing and a really captivating read.

Thank you for sharing it to us on FictionPress,

desmoulins.

Wow. I just finished reading this amazing story in about... 4 hours. And I loved it! Of course every time I read a story I feel bad for the other people.. You know like Cobe, because he's a great guy and he deserves someone good. And he's hot. I would love to see a story written about him, although I know writers can't just make it up on the spot! But it would be lovely to see his story someday! Also I know it's a weird request but if you wrote a story about... I'm drawing a blank on their names. (That's what happens when you read for four hours straight!) The two preschoolers who fight all the time. Obviously when their older... but they do seem like the type who would "secretly like each other".

Anyways I will definitely be looking out for more of your stories!

-Dezzie

Amber is a Bitch. I hate her. I have hated her since chappie 1, But have now decided that she is the devils spawn. Jesus.

Not my favorite. I liked Bronwyn and Emery's relationship, but thought Bronwyn and Amber's was very dysfunctional. I find it creepy that anyone would be interested in their sister's boyfriend and can't understand why Bronwyn put up with Amber's shit.

Love this story, second time reading it and I never get tired of reading it! Thanks for sharing it! :D Can't wait to read more of your stories! :D Keep up the good work! :D