Awww! So freaking cute! Though, I do wish they had one more kiss at the end. Awesome story! It was amazingly well written and thought out. I love your characters and the chemistry between Bronwyn and Emery. It was a very unique story. Love it!

Hmmmm, seems like Amber may be a cheater.

amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazing :)

OMG! This was freakin amazin! I loved it sooooo much! Emery and Bronwyn are both amazing! So glad that they goto together at the end! ;D The kiss in the other chapterwas awesome! :D

Oh and Matt and his comebacks ( in chap 11?) were hilarious!

One of my fav stories on fictionpress! :D

I loved this story! I swear for years i have been reading stories, of course enjoying them but I think I have always had an ideal story in mind and you and your talented writting has blown my mind and made me realising what i was missing! :) You did an amazing job and i can't wait to read more of your work. Thankyou, it has been a pleasure reading your work 3

AMAZING! I love this!

D'AWWWW! Hahaha, sorry, that ending was just too cute to resist. I really enjoyed this story a lot. At first I didn't really like emery, mainly because he was with amber, but toward the end I didn't mind as much because they work really well together. opal was a cutie and I absolutely ADORE Cobe. I don't even know why
Your writing style is really fantastic. It's really fluid, but sometimes a bit too descriptive...if that's possible. Well I had a lot of fun reading this, so thanks for writing!

Totally called it.

WOW! And I thought I had read through all the popular stories here. I have no idea how I missed this one for so long, but I'm definitely enjoying it! :)

An excellent story. A great deal of teen angst... often to the point that it made me want to bounce my head off of a wall, but still believable and heartwarming at the end. Great job!

I don't think that lying to her sister was the right way to resolve the issue. The truth would have been better. But I can also understand why she would feel desperate to win her sister back.

Mom is great. She saw right into the heart of the matter and was able to help... but if she saw this happening from the beginning, why didn't she ever try to speak with Amber?

Then again, she could choose to stay away from Emery and remain loyal to her sister. Family is forever. There would be other guys. But teen angst and hormones don't easily understand those simple truths.

Wow, what a confusing mess to have to deal with. And worse, to suddenly find yourself involuntarily in the middle of a conflict that you had nothing to do with creating. I think maybe I would buy an airplane ticket to anywhere and tell everyone to call me once they had it all worked out.

The harder she holds on, the more he will slip away. And in the process she will destroy her other relationships as well. This sort of thing really does happen, which makes this story even sadder.