I get it! Emery likes it; Amber was just trying to get to know him a little in a roundabout way! If I were to assume Amber would get very upset when she sees how Brownyn stole her boyfriend (kind of sort of not really), would I be right, or am I assuming too much!

UPDATE SOON!

THIS IS REALLY AND I MEAN REALLY GOOD. KEEP IT UP I WOULD LIKE TO READ MORE SOON, EVEN THOUGH IKNOW HOW LONG UPDATES TAKE, ANYWHOO GEAT JOB

hi

keep writing! i wnt to know what's up with amber and emery... very mysterious!

good first chapter. i like how there was a bit of suspense like wanting to kno wat was gonna happen nxt. keep writing!

There's something I really love about your writing. It's like, I'm reading a REAL book, you know? Because whenever I read a story here on Fictionpress - I get the obvious, amateur, online-story feeling when I read it. But when I read your work, it's seriously like I'm reading a real, hardcover book in front of me. Your work feels so professional.

Great job. :D

ooh interesting

and Sufjan Stevens.

for a while, when i couldn't remember the name properly

i called it Surfjam Stevens

haha

i think the plot line so far

it's intersting

and different

and i have NO idea where it's going to go

so it's cool )

can't wait for chapter three

izzie

T_T no Emery! :O

But as long as he is back in the next chapter I'm happy :D

p.s i like the name Bronwyn

new reader! I really LOVE your story so far. No wonder you got EIGHTEEN reviews on your first chapter, it's so addicting! (: Your characrters/dialouge is so realistic, I wouldn't be suprised if you told me this stuff actually happened. And Emery? And Amber? What's up with them? Does he beat her or something? I HAVE to know what's going on. Please, please update soon and I'll give you..PIXIESTIX! No one can pass up those! (:

I think Amber is only doing it to impress her boyfriend...but then the boyfriend likes her instead of Amber..and then conflict begins lol...that's just a guess..Well, keep me guessing! lol

Nice chapter...that was a quick update too, :). It kind of sounds like Amber has an inferiority complex or something!

Update soon.

*toddler impression* MORE! MORE! MORE!

Hehe.

Dude, if that was me in...was her name even mentioned? Anywho, if it was me in the narrator's place, I would've died. Or at least holed up in my room for the next few hours. Hehe.

Haha! Very intreguing start I'll deffinetly look forward to more. _ Keep up the nice work!

Interesting start...I wonder why Amber is being weird...

hah! talk about awkward! update soon!