|Reviews for Emery & Me|
| ihrtbks 5/30/07 . chapter 2
I get it! Emery likes it; Amber was just trying to get to know him a little in a roundabout way! If I were to assume Amber would get very upset when she sees how Brownyn stole her boyfriend (kind of sort of not really), would I be right, or am I assuming too much!
| tornangelwings 5/30/07 . chapter 2
THIS IS REALLY AND I MEAN REALLY GOOD. KEEP IT UP I WOULD LIKE TO READ MORE SOON, EVEN THOUGH IKNOW HOW LONG UPDATES TAKE, ANYWHOO GEAT JOB
| PapillonLove 5/30/07 . chapter 2
| flojo22811 5/30/07 . chapter 2
keep writing! i wnt to know what's up with amber and emery... very mysterious!
| rockMus 5/30/07 . chapter 2
good first chapter. i like how there was a bit of suspense like wanting to kno wat was gonna happen nxt. keep writing!
| akb-inactive 5/30/07 . chapter 2
There's something I really love about your writing. It's like, I'm reading a REAL book, you know? Because whenever I read a story here on Fictionpress - I get the obvious, amateur, online-story feeling when I read it. But when I read your work, it's seriously like I'm reading a real, hardcover book in front of me. Your work feels so professional.
Great job. :D
| OoohLookACat 5/30/07 . chapter 2
and Sufjan Stevens.
for a while, when i couldn't remember the name properly
i called it Surfjam Stevens
i think the plot line so far
and i have NO idea where it's going to go
so it's cool )
can't wait for chapter three
| xemeraldeyesx 5/30/07 . chapter 2
T_T no Emery! :O
But as long as he is back in the next chapter I'm happy :D
p.s i like the name Bronwyn
| remae 5/30/07 . chapter 2
new reader! I really LOVE your story so far. No wonder you got EIGHTEEN reviews on your first chapter, it's so addicting! (: Your characrters/dialouge is so realistic, I wouldn't be suprised if you told me this stuff actually happened. And Emery? And Amber? What's up with them? Does he beat her or something? I HAVE to know what's going on. Please, please update soon and I'll give you..PIXIESTIX! No one can pass up those! (:
| emotionless-stares 5/30/07 . chapter 2
I think Amber is only doing it to impress her boyfriend...but then the boyfriend likes her instead of Amber..and then conflict begins lol...that's just a guess..Well, keep me guessing! lol
| Etherelda 5/30/07 . chapter 2
Nice chapter...that was a quick update too, :). It kind of sounds like Amber has an inferiority complex or something!
| A Reader Peep 5/30/07 . chapter 1
*toddler impression* MORE! MORE! MORE!
Dude, if that was me in...was her name even mentioned? Anywho, if it was me in the narrator's place, I would've died. Or at least holed up in my room for the next few hours. Hehe.
| Miz Em 5/27/07 . chapter 1
Haha! Very intreguing start I'll deffinetly look forward to more. _ Keep up the nice work!
| emotionless-stares 5/27/07 . chapter 1
Interesting start...I wonder why Amber is being weird...
| toxic-noodle725 5/27/07 . chapter 1
hah! talk about awkward! update soon!