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| Emuroo 2007-08-06 ch 1, | abuseI like the description. I think that my favorite part was "It’s like a metaphor for people you love. Even if they’re gone, their impression is still with you." That is true in so many ways. Great job. |
| PaulAsaran 2007-05-29 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting; I might never look at a candle in the same way again. You did a great job with your expressionism and tone and imagery. I love it. |
| woundedmaiden 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseI love it. It's beautiful and gives wonderful sensory images. Really, beautiful. |
| Kircille 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseI especially love paragraphs 3 - 5; how mesmerizing. :] |
| castelgard 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abusei love the emotions. and also the way you convey the reasons why you like candles. very original. |