 The Last Muse 2007-07-08 . chapter 3Interesting story- Gwen seems like a character. Can you provide translations for your... usage of foreign languages at the bottom? I mean, I understood some of the exchanges going on, but I'm not sure if my assumptions were correct. Anyways, this story has quite a lot going on - alot of potential plot points - but still, work on These circumstances!
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